Comments on: Ed is dead #4

By: An Unreliable Witness

An Unreliable Witness — Wed, 04 Mar 2009 12:16:33 +0000

tigga — Don’t kill yourself, tigga. No, don’t do it. Not when there are bound to be so many more Unreliable Witness posts about families sucking, which will make you want to commit suicide in ever more interesting ways.

Ani — Exhibit. It might mean he’s dead. It might mean he’s just stuffed. As it were. Missus.

Robb x2 — The details of Capability Brown cannot be divulged. As to your other comment, thank you for the appreciative feedback. And I know exactly what you mean.

Blueskies — Hello and welcome. I confess that I don’t watch Coronation Street. Nor any soaps. Nor any TV. I think I am turning into a cultural snob.

By: blueskies

blueskies — Wed, 04 Mar 2009 11:54:38 +0000

Do you watch Coronation Street? This is the second time I have heard Capability Brown mentioned in one week. I don’t think it’s a coincidence, I think it is a conspiracy.

By: Robb Todd

Robb Todd — Tue, 03 Mar 2009 23:09:06 +0000

Okay, I went back and caught up on the series. #4 was the first one I read, and I must say that I think it works very all on it’s own as a piece of flash fiction. The rest were good as well, but something to consider. You have a very tight narrative in this single piece. Details unfold in a way that made me want to read it a few more times, which all good flash fiction does. So much between the lines.

By: Robb Todd

Robb Todd — Tue, 03 Mar 2009 22:50:55 +0000

Said so much with so little. Wonderful, tight story.

One question, though: Is Capability Brown like the British version of Bob Vila?

By: Ani

Ani — Tue, 03 Mar 2009 22:48:23 +0000

I was wondering where the old chap had got to.

Wait. Exhibit? What do you mean, EXHIBIT?!

By: tigga

tigga — Tue, 03 Mar 2009 21:48:45 +0000

Second post in a row I just read about families sucking. I think I’m going to crawl off and kill myself. I hope you are happy.